Waterworld

Waterworld
Who’s ready to go to Flaxmere splashy Waterworld?

When I was at waterworld I felt warm and cold in the big huge pool. We are here so we can get better at swimming. Waterworld is in Flaxmere nearly by Peterhead. Room 21,20,19 and 18 went to Waterworld. What we did was so cool!

I smelt the chlorine water upon me in the water.I heard the echoing voices in waterworld.I touched the nice flowey water upon me.I felt the bumpy wavy wall.I saw the big pool and I knew what pool I was going in.The water was as nice as a butterfly.

“My swimming instructor said “please do dolphin dives but do it twice so go from here to the other end and come back.”Then do freestyle “explained the instructor.”After that do backstroke “answered the instructor.

My favorite part of it when we did freestyle in the big pool and freestyle with the board because it is sooooooooo fun.

I think I will be working on my backstroke a lot because I am really bad at my backstroke.

Māui and the sun

Māui and the sun

It was a dark windy night.

The blazing,burning sun went down from the nice sky.

Māui and his brothers couldn't eat or hunt because the sun was going down too fast.

Māui said’ he goes down to fast”.

Māui had an idea. “Brothers brothers come here I've got an idea”.

The brothers came to Māui ,”you said something Māui”.

“Yes I said I have an idea”.

We should make some flax ropes and catch the sun.

When the flax ropes were ready they were ready.

Māui and his brothers set off.

Māui and his brothers went into the shadow.

They went under the huge rock.

Then on the count of 3 they pulled and pulled.

Māui went to the sun and started to beat the sun up.

The sun said’ stop,stop you're hurting me.

Māui said’ I’m only doing this because you are not going slow like the other suns do.

“Fine I will go slow moaned’ the sun.

Then me and my brothers had time to eat,fish and hunt.

Māui and his brothers were so happy.

The sun was now going slow like the other suns do.

The giant doughnut.

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         MMMMMM!Look at that yummy,sprinkled,pink doughnut.I wish I was there to eat it all but I know I couldn't eat all of that, I would get a stomach ache.

I will tell you all our names.Our names are Fatihah,Ayla and Kyra.Kyra is the oldest.Fatihah is the second oldest.And of cause Ayla is the youngest.We were playing some golf.Kyra was always winning but ten times Kyra didn't get it in but Ayla shot it In the hole.

After our game we ate some of the sprinkled,pink doughnut yummy right.I forgot that the ball was a sprinkle.Funny right who do you know that plays golf with a sprinkle.Hahahaha.

The person with the blue t-shirt was Kyra.And the person with the white t-shirt was Fatihah.And finally the person with the green top was Ayla.

Guess what?-when my sister’s weren't looking I ate a sprinkle.

Let Me Tell You About Who Won well Fatihah Was winning a  little bit and Ayla was winning a little bit.

Kyra was really good at doing it.She was like playing like a cheetah but a cheetah will run.So I will tell you about what the points were.The points were 10 points to Ayla.Fatihah got 20 points.And finally Miss Kyra got 21 points so it was a close game.Kyra won by 1 point.It was a close game because Fatihah got 20 and then Kyra shot It over into the hole.And then after our game of golf we started to get hungry like a lion viciously eating its meat hungrily.Wow look at that shot you just got in the ball.It was zooming past fast.

Flaming fire story.

                   Hawke’s Bay Fire

Huge fire sparks State of emergency

Flames Horrify Resident
 Wow!Look at that flaming house it looked like it got burned and flamed by the sun.

Oh!Look at our flaming,blazing,burning hot house.I wish our house didn't turn into flames and ash.I wonder if they are going to fix our house.Of course they will fix our house.Are they going to make it new.Probably they will change it.But I like our old nice house.The fire was burning hot.That fire is blazing,burning hot.A person was about to tell everyone that there was a fire at
Waimarima. Did you guys know that there was a fire in Waimarama.I didn't know that.It's true.Bang, crash went the blocks and bricks smashing into each other!

Superman

Superman

          Wow Superman you just saved my life superman.

          Superman you are so strong like a bullet going through a person's heart.

          Superman was gone to get someone her name was Disha.She was sinking.Look at superman he is so good at saving people.

I hear someone yelling for help.A girl was saying”help help please I'm sinking i'm coming said”Superman.

Superman can fly very high.

Superman you are super duper nice.

As Superman was zooming with his running scene.

I feel really good about this story because is good and strong.

Mihi

Mihi

Tena kōutōu katōa.

Nō Te-Puke ahau (where from)

Kei Flaxmere tōku kainga inaianei (I live now)

Kō Frimley tōku kura (school)

Kō K.C tōku matua (Father)

Kō Nicole tōku whaea (Mother)

Kō Kyra-Laize tōku ingōa (name)

Nō rera,tena kōutōu,tena kōutōu

Tena tatōu katōa (greetings to you,to us all)

Swing Bridge.

                                                                                                                                               

There was three little girls going on a trip, well it wasn't really a trip it was an adventure.They were wandering around and they saw a sign in the bushes- it said the creepy bridge appears 1 km far away.

”Should we go to the creepy bridge? we should “said one of the sisters. I bought my camera.

Lets look on the back and see what it says.Oh no it says on the back  don't cross the bridge.Oh now do you want to go on  the bridge now...Yes.What ?You still want to go on?  See the bridge.

Yes PLEASE with a cherry on top.

Ok fine we will go to the bridge and walk on it.Let me tell you my name.My name is Katlyn.My sister is called Disha and Fatihah.Kyra is the oldest ,Disha is the second oldest and of cause Fatihah is the smallest.Kyra is 10.Disha is 9.Fatiha is 8.Katlyn led the way to the bridge.

How much longer is there until we're there.Oh look there's a sign it says 2 more minutes until you get to the creepy and the unsafe bridge says the sign...And they were gone like a blaze.

“Oh look at that horrible bridge it looks like it's been sitting there for 100 years” said Disha.

“It looks like a total piece of garbage” said Kyra

“It does look like a piece of garbage” said Fatiha.

“Lets test it” said Disha.

“With what?”said Kyra.

“Of course a branch” said Disha.

“Oh ok get the branch” said Kyra to Disha.

“No!We all can do it together” said Disha.

”Ok said Fatiha ok said Kyra with a sad face.

Why are you sad because I am busy doing my homework and I have to finish it today?

Do it when we go back home.Ok said`Kyra.

Pull`Pull`Pull kerk.. said the branch snapping.

We finally got it off.Ready on three we will throw it off on the bridge go 1...2...3.Throw wow it didn't snapped

.I thought it was going to break like the other bridge that we tested.

Wait mum did the testing last time remember.Oh yeah I remember that.Did we help her no we didn't cause we were only 3 years old said Disha.Well do one of you want to get the stick...No thanks said Fatiha...No thanks said Disha...Do you want me to do get it.Will you be brave enough like you won't be brave.Fatiha and Disha started laughing!